Discussion in 'Works In Progress (WIP)' started by rein2007, Feb 29, 2008.
it is interesting but it is called "the dark knight" so where is the obvious star of the show?
I'm not sure jet, but I like the front the way it is now.
Maybe I'm going to make a 2e version with the Bat on the front.
fair enough...not my tastes but if you are happy with it...maybe move the "why so serious" up since there is a big void to the left of the joker. it looks bare.
the other big problem is the lack of color balance since you have the orange and yellow tones on the top back but no where else. it is actually distracting since it pops the most on the whole cover since it stands out. you need to balance the colors one way of the other. think about the possibilities if you went with that color scheme on the front with that joker picutre. that would be really cool...instead of the blue.
you also have the same problem on the back as the front with the bare area to the right ot batman's head btw that and the code. maybe the bat signal in the sky there? it isn't very visually interesting yet.
also, why is the tag line in english but not the synopsis?
the title treatment is a little drab. just arial black in white? maybe try a more festive font!
also, i guess you realize that your logos/legal and such on the back are not correct and the spine dvd logo is the old one as well.
finally, what is the grey to the right of batman's head under the code?
What Mr. Pills said...plus don't hide Bat Man's face with Special Feature words.
Because I had some comments of the front on other forums I've added the Bat on the front.
The synopsis will be added as soon as I've completed the design.
Ilike it better, but still move "Special Features down away from the face.. and I like the front better now, but I liked the more solid coat of Joker rather than the building showing a lil.. the collar looks odd now
maybe go back to the original front and put a pic of batman on the bike or batmobile to the left of the joker. cor is right...it doesn't sit righ
The updated version looks excellent dude
You have to have batman but it looks awesome!
looks sweet to me
WB logo to the bottom of the spine
lower special features a hair
and please do a bluray version
What a way to revive the late, great Heath Ledger! Great start! I like the color scheme.
I think you should use the correct credits for the back of the cover...............…….........
his looks nice man !!!!