The Dark Knight

Discussion in 'Works In Progress (WIP)' started by rein2007, Feb 29, 2008.

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  1. rein2007

    rein2007 New Member Member

    My Version:
     

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  2. Paper Pills

    Paper Pills Sophomore Designer

    it is interesting but it is called "the dark knight" so where is the obvious star of the show?
     
  3. rein2007

    rein2007 New Member Member

    Update:

    I'm not sure jet, but I like the front the way it is now.
    Maybe I'm going to make a 2e version with the Bat on the front.

    Update:

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  4. Paper Pills

    Paper Pills Sophomore Designer

    fair enough...not my tastes but if you are happy with it...maybe move the "why so serious" up since there is a big void to the left of the joker. it looks bare.

    the other big problem is the lack of color balance since you have the orange and yellow tones on the top back but no where else. it is actually distracting since it pops the most on the whole cover since it stands out. you need to balance the colors one way of the other. think about the possibilities if you went with that color scheme on the front with that joker picutre. that would be really cool...instead of the blue.

    you also have the same problem on the back as the front with the bare area to the right ot batman's head btw that and the code. maybe the bat signal in the sky there? it isn't very visually interesting yet.

    also, why is the tag line in english but not the synopsis?

    the title treatment is a little drab. just arial black in white? maybe try a more festive font!

    also, i guess you realize that your logos/legal and such on the back are not correct and the spine dvd logo is the old one as well.

    finally, what is the grey to the right of batman's head under the code?
     
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  5. zantasha

    zantasha Freshman Master Designer

    What Mr. Pills said...plus don't hide Bat Man's face with Special Feature words.
     
  6. rein2007

    rein2007 New Member Member

    Changes

    Because I had some comments of the front on other forums I've added the Bat on the front.
    The synopsis will be added as soon as I've completed the design.

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  7. Cor

    Cor Freshman Member

    Ilike it better, but still move "Special Features down away from the face.. and I like the front better now, but I liked the more solid coat of Joker rather than the building showing a lil.. the collar looks odd now
     
  8. Paper Pills

    Paper Pills Sophomore Designer

    maybe go back to the original front and put a pic of batman on the bike or batmobile to the left of the joker. cor is right...it doesn't sit righ
     
  9. adamkitchin

    adamkitchin Member Member

    The updated version looks excellent dude :)
     
  10. adaceg

    adaceg New Member Member

    You have to have batman but it looks awesome!
     
  11. gbk33

    gbk33 Site Moderator Staff Member Site Staff

    looks sweet to me
     
  12. AmishFury

    AmishFury New Member Member

    my opinions...

    WB logo to the bottom of the spine
    lower special features a hair

    and please do a bluray version
     
  13. hideaf

    hideaf New Member Member

    What a way to revive the late, great Heath Ledger! Great start! I like the color scheme.

    Hideaf
     
  14. hollywoodstudios

    hollywoodstudios New Member Member

    I think you should use the correct credits for the back of the cover...............…….........
     
  15. Starscream

    Starscream Freshman Member

    excellent work
     
  16. Kellevra

    Kellevra Freshman Member

    his looks nice man !!!!
     
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